Wednesday, October 6, 2010

Water Pollution (First Draft)

               Water pollution is one of the worst forms of pollution in the world. For example, take a look at a glass of water. It may appear clean, but it includes millions of bacteria and impurities. Water pollution occurs when a body of water is affected due to the addition of large amounts of materials of the water. We know that water cover approximately 70% of the earth surface. Water is very important resource for people and the environment. 

            Water pollution is happened as a result of, oil and a lot of wastes are leaking in the rivers and seas from ships. This oil can also ruin the shores.In addition to, Sewage water, which contains millions of bacteria and germs, is throwing in lakes and rivers. As well as the water of acid rain, which is falling in all the resource of water. Acid rain has been created as a result of the burning of gas, oil, and coal. Water also is contaminated through pumping chemicals of the factories in the rivers and seas. Moreover the farmers who throw deadly animals and birds in the rivers.

           The effects of pollution in the water are numerous. Water pollution affects drinking water, rivers, oceans, and lakes all over the world. Water pollution harms human health and the nature. In rivers, oceans, and seas, the water pollution can be lethal, killing the fish and plant life. This in turn can kill the birds and other animals that eat this contaminated food supply. The effects of water pollution have also been considered as the leading cause of human deaths worldwide. Almost every type of contamination found in water has a harmful effect on human. Blood diseases, heart disease, and nervous system disorders are commonly linked to the effects of water pollution. Many of the toxins found in polluted water are cancered, which means they can cause cancer. Some substances can even affect generations to come by changing the body's chromosomal make up. Less severe effects of water pollution can include diarrhea, skin lesions, and vomiting, which are organic diseases.

              Finding ways to implement or apply water pollution solutions are the only hope to stem or stop the effects of water pollution on our natural resources, and the people and the animals that need these resources to survive. Most water pollution control comes from the governmental level. The government should put awareness programmers to make people understand the importance of their environment and nature. The government also should try to bury the radioactive wastes in the desert. In stead of throwing the wastes of factories in the rivers and seas, the best way to disposal or eliminate them is to recycle them. The general public can aid in water pollution control by simply getting educated on ways to aviod polluting. This can include the proper disposal of household chemicals so they don't make their way untreated into bodies of water or water supplies. Another way to fight water pollution is to reduce the air pollution which leads to pollution of rain water and it transforms into acid rain.It can even be as simple as making sure your car isn't leaking fluids that can get mixed in with runoff when it rains and cause ground water pollution.

            Finally,  the problems associated with water pollution have the capabilities to disrupt or hinder life on our planet to still for a great extent. As we live in the 21st century, awareness and education will most assuredly continue to be the two most important ways to prevent water pollution. If these measures are not taken and water pollution continues, life on earth will suffer severely. Global environmental collapse is not inevitable. But the developed world must work with the developing world to ensure that new industrialized economies do not add to the world's environmental problems. People must learn that energy use can be dramatically diminished or decreased without sacrificing comfort. In short, with the technology that currently exists, the years of global environmental mistreatment can begin to be reversed and ended.

4 comments:

  1. A good essay but it contains many difficult vocabulary, try to make the vocabulary clearer and more understandable.
    I ask you to access the weblogs of Aya Ragab, Elham, Wafaa and Yosra to critically read their essays. Then send them comments and suggestions for improving their essays. You can use the editing checklist uploaded to the class weblog to help you in the process of editing your friends' essays.

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  2. Wonderful essay Soso. I hope the best to you in shaa Allah . Well done my dear.

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  3. nice essay desert rose it is cohesioned well

    there are many vocabs that i can`t understand it like detrimental ,diarrhea, skin lesions, and vomitin

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  4. A good essay, but I think it is borrowed from the internet. If you want to use the internet, you can read essays about the topic, but when you want to write your own essay, use your own words. So, iam looking forward to see your own essay not a copy of an internet essay. O.K.
    Actually, I didnt find any mistakes to correct and I think by doing so we will lose the main objective of the course that is improving the writing performance and critical reading of you.

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